The point of view of my story

The book I'm reading The female of the species
By:Mindy McGinnis. 

This book is told in 3 points of view. All of 3 p.o.v's are told from first person. The three views are told from Alex,Jack,and Peekay. Alex is very quiet and observent. Jack is very athletic and smart. Peekay is a 'good girl' and the pastors daughter. I like the fact that you can get the same story from 2 or three point of views. I think it would be different and maybe better if every one mentioned in the story had a short chapter so we can see their point of view. That way if their is a conflict you can read both sids of the problen and decied who is right and who is wrong.

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  1. AnonymousNovember 24, 2017 at 6:32 PM

    This sounds like an interesting story, If you like the way it's told, you might like The Girl with All the Gifts. It has a similar narration. Try to include more details in your next post, be specific.

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